The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The pies give information about the percentages of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other
languages
in addition
to English in 2000 and 2010. It is important to note that Germany is the one
language
which did not change in both years. Spanish which stood at 30% in 2000 was the common
language
that students spoke in 2000. In comparison with French, Other
languages
were half of the Spanish rate of 15%.
Moreover
, No other
language
was one-fifth of the chart in 2000
in contrast
with German and Two other
languages
which were 10% of the pie chart in the same year. In 2010, the only
language
which did not change was German with 10% in compare with Spanish, Another
language
and Two other
languages
which increased by 5%.
Furthermore
, No other
languages
experienced a dramatic fall from 20% to 10%
also
in 2010 French, German and No other
languages
stood at the same rate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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