The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
The chart below
representes
the data on the trends of professions in the United States from 1975 to 2025.
Looking from an Correct your spelling
represents
overall
perspective, it is evident that Services will be the most progressive employment part in the United States. However
, prediction shows that the Agriculture
sector
will be the least employed in the future. Moreover
, it can be clearly seen that Manufactures sector
was not been employed in the beginning and will not be employed in the future.
To begin
with, in 1975 the Agriculture
sector
showed the highest figures (80 million
). In contrast
, Services and Manufactures illustrated the lowest figures and were in the same level of employment (9 million
). In the 1977 numbers of Agriculture
sector
significantly dropped (43 million
) . Conversely
, in the same year number
of Services and Manufactures slightly started to grow. Change the article
a number
the number
Then
, in 1980 all three sectors crossed at the same point ( 40 million
). After, this
year figures for the Service sector
started considerably increasing and should achieve 90 million
workers in 2025. Despite that, the numbers of
the Change preposition
in
Agriculture
sector
continued to fall and in 2025 should reach 10 million
employees . The same situation is with the Manufacturing sector
.
In conclusion, the service sector
will be the most popular between
employees in the future Change preposition
among
to compare
with the Change the verb form
compared
agriculture
and manufacture
sectors.Wrong verb form
manufacturing
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