You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

#credit #card #bank #lists #purchases #manager #items

Dear Sir or Madam, I Naga Swetha, have been maintaining a

credit

card

in your bank for the

last

three years

and

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the number is 5247 9818 0007 0954 and recently upgraded to a Coral

credit

card

. I received a

credit

card

statement

for the month of January 2023.

However

, I would like to raise a few concerns regarding

last

month's bank

statement

. In the

statement

, there are a few expensive items purchased by using my

credit

card

Namely, a 65 inches LED TV, the cost

was

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Rs45000 and 250

liters

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Refrigerator,

the

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price

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Rs 24000. I did not buy any items since, December 2021, and

also

I have not received any alerts on my mobile. After, seeing the

statement

I cross-verified it with my online banking

credit

card

portal. I have checked my available balance on the

card

and it shows the correct amount as I have previously. Kindly verify from your side, whether the

statement

is correct or mistakenly sent to me. Let me know, if you require any

further

details. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Naga Swetha.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

186 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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