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Band 6.5

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

#credit #card #bank #lists #purchases #manager #items
Dear Sir or Madam, I Naga Swetha, have been maintaining a
credit
card
 in your bank for the
last
 three years
and
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the number is 5247 9818 0007 0954 and recently upgraded to a Coral
credit
card
. I received a
credit
card
statement
 for the month of January 2023.
However
, I would like to raise a few concerns regarding
last
 month's bank
statement
. In the
statement
, there are a few expensive items purchased by using my
credit
card
 Namely, a 65 inches LED TV, the cost
was
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Rs45000 and 250
liters
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the
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price
was
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Rs 24000. I did not buy any items since, December 2021, and
also
 I have not received any alerts on my mobile. After, seeing the
statement
 I cross-verified it with my online banking
credit
card
 portal. I have checked my available balance on the
card
 and it shows the correct amount as I have previously. Kindly verify from your side, whether the
statement
 is correct or mistakenly sent to me. Let me know, if you require any
further
 details. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Naga Swetha.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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