You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Emma Stone and I am writing
this
letter in regard to a letter I have just received from the bank, warning me about some unusual purchases in a baby store named "Babay
Star" that have been made under my account, with a total amount of 2,000$ during the past two weeks. Those purchases, undoubtedly, were not made by me, as I Correct your spelling
Baby
further
explain.
I am a customer of your bank, for the last
20 years, since I was 25 years old, and opened a bank account under my name in your branch. I've always paid my bills on time, and there were
never any problem with my income during those years.
In a rough calculation , I am about to turn 45 next summer, and my kids are all grown up. There is obviously a mistake that Change the verb form
was
have
been made upChange the verb form
has
,
since there is no way that I will need to buy baby toys, clothes, or food and Remove the comma
apply
beside
the fact that I will never spend 2,000$ on Replace the word
besides
such
items. Additionally
, two weeks ago I went out on a cruise to greece
, and I Change the capitalization
Greece
have
just returned yesterday, which Unnecessary verb
apply
mean
that I was not able to Correct subject-verb agreement
means
preform
those purchases. I'm attaching to you my cruise tickets as Correct your spelling
perform
a
proof.
I would very much appreciate your Remove the article
apply
immediately
response to Change the adverb
immediate
this
urgent matter, I would like you to open an investigation regarding this
mishap, und
of course refund me the amount of money since I am in need Correct your spelling
and
for
it for my son's wedding which is Change preposition
of
due to
next month.
I look further
to hear from you and to be ensure
that everything is taken care of.
Yours faithfully,
Emma StoneChange the verb form
ensure
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite