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This line chart shows trends in terms of employment i the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

This line chart shows trends in terms of employment i the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
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This
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In this
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 line chart we can see trends of employment in different things in the United States of America throughout the years in millions.
Over all
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, we can see that during the
last
 15 years, between the years 1975 and
2025
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 there has been some increment in the area of services and some decreasement in manufacturing and agriculture.
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, we can see that at
first
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 the services were steady between 10 and 15 million but in 1979
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 went up sharply to end in 90. In the area of
manufacturing
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 it was similar to services at
first,
in 1979 it went up and got to 40
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 in 1980 it dropped to 10 million in 2025.
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 but not least, the one that had the most changes
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 was agriculture. It started in 1975 with 80 million just to
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 to 50 in 1979, to finish up with 10 in 2025.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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