The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010.
The bar charts illustrate the
percentage
of British pupils at a university in England who are able to speak other
languages
in addition
to English in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that apart from English most of the
students
can speak Spanish only
whereas
few of them can speak two other
languages
.
To begin
, in 2000 most
of
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British
students
are able to speak Spanish only and one-fifths of the
students
cannot speak other
languages
.
However
, the same
percentage
of 15% of British
students
can speak French only and another language.
Also
, one-ten of the
students
can speak two other
languages
and German only.
Furthermore
, in 2010 the highest
percentage
of the
students
are able to speak Spanish only which shows a slight increase and 20% of the
students
can speak another language. Meanwhile, the same
percentage
of the
students
of 10% can speak no other language, french only and German only which is the lowest number compared to others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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