The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the export revenue in five groups in a particular country
while
the given table provides key information about the proportion change in each category of exports between 2015 and 2016. The units are measured in of billions Linking Words
dollars
and percentages.
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Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the export earnings and the proportion changes in almost groups increased throughout the given period Linking Words
except
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forexcept
gems
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jewellery
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In terms of export revenue in five categories, petroleum Use synonyms
products
were the highest gain at just above 60 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2015, Use synonyms
while
textile was the smallest gain and stood at about 27 Linking Words
billion
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dollars
. The remaining categories Use synonyms
such
as engineered goods, Linking Words
gems
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jewellery
and agricultural Use synonyms
products
stood at around 58 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
, 44 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
and 31 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
respectively. In 2016, petroleum Use synonyms
products
and engineered goods both experienced an increase of 62 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
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Additionally
, textiles and agricultural Linking Words
products
witnessed a growth of approximately 32 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
gems
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jewellery
experienced a slight decrease about of 32 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
.
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the proportion changes from 2015 to 2016, most of all the groups, petroleum Remove the preposition
apply
products
, engineered goods, agricultural Use synonyms
products
and textiles witnessed Use synonyms
a
dramatic growth Correct article usage
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accounted
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accounting
third,
8.5%, 0.81% and 15.24 respectively, Linking Words
whereas
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gems
and Use synonyms
jewellery
experienced a decline in the amount of 5.18%.Use synonyms
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