The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the export revenue in five groups in a particular country
while
the given table provides key information about the proportion change in each category of exports between 2015 and 2016. The units are measured in of billions dollars
and percentages.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the export earnings and the proportion changes in almost groups increased throughout the given period except
Add the preposition
forexcept
gems
and jewellery
.
In terms of export revenue in five categories, petroleum products
were the highest gain at just above 60 billion
dollars
in 2015, while
textile was the smallest gain and stood at about 27 billion
dollars
. The remaining categories such
as engineered goods, gems
and jewellery
and agricultural products
stood at around 58 billion
dollars
, 44 billion
dollars
and 31 billion
dollars
respectively. In 2016, petroleum products
and engineered goods both experienced an increase of 62 billion
dollars
. Additionally
, textiles and agricultural products
witnessed a growth of approximately 32 billion
dollars
. Meanwhile, the gems
and jewellery
experienced a slight decrease about of 32 billion
dollars
.
Regarding to
the proportion changes from 2015 to 2016, most of all the groups, petroleum Remove the preposition
apply
products
, engineered goods, agricultural products
and textiles witnessed a
dramatic growth Correct article usage
apply
accounted
for one-Wrong verb form
accounting
third,
8.5%, 0.81% and 15.24 respectively, whereas
gems
and jewellery
experienced a decline in the amount of 5.18%.Submitted by mdelvega90 on
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