The presented pie chart gives data on the trend of occupation of males and females in the United Kingdom in 1992.

The presented pie chart gives data on the trend of occupation of males and females in the United Kingdom in 1992.
The provided illustration compares the number of different jobs that were chosen by females and males in Great Britain in 1992.
According to
the data on the illustration, women and
men
mostly chose managerial and professional;
nevertheless
, the
percent
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of
men
, who picked manual jobs is significantly higher by 20% than
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women
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, who
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employed more
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non-manual occupations. In 1992, the most employed job by
men
was managerial and professional with 36% out of all non-manual occupations. It follows the other manual duties, which
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marginally lower by 10% than non-manual.
In contrast
with female's choice of work, the non-manual is 69% summary and the most picked job was clerical and related. It was almost of quarter higher
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men
's
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of non-manual jobs.
However
on the other hand
manual duties
in
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that time were picked by males by 52% total, which
is considerably exceeds
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the female's manual 
percent
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.
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