The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The upper and lower charts illustrate the
percentage
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of
British
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students
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' second languages at one university in the UK during the given years. A closer examination of the charts reveals that
British
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students
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who were able to speak German made up the highest number
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30% in 2000 and 35% in 2010.
However
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,
while
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the
percentage
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of
British
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students
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only speaking
English
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halved from 20% in 2000 to 10% in 2010, that of those using another language
besides
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French, German, and Spanish increased from 15% in 2000 to 20% in 2010.
This
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alternation caused the figure for
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language users to surpass that for
English
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speakers without other language abilities in 2010.
Furthermore
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, a similar trend was seen in
British
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students
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who could speak French and two other languages.
While
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the
percentage
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of
students
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who were trilingual rose by 5%, accounting for 15% in 2010, that of those speaking French declined by the same
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, reaching 10% in 2010.
In contrast
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,
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students
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who could speak German
in addition
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to
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remained the same
percentage
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of 10% over the corresponding period, which was the lowest figure.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the majority of
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students
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could use other languages
in addition
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to
English
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both in 2000 and 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, british, students, english with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • multilingualism
  • globalisation
  • immigration
  • education policy
  • career prospects
  • cultural understanding
  • distribution
  • percentage
  • increased/decreased
  • significant
  • trends
  • shifts
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