The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates what purposes is
water
utilized in disparate 6 areas in the globe. In brief, agricultural
use
is the highest position
besides
North
America
and
Europe
, and the lowest rate in all of
6
Correct article usage
the 6
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places is domestic
use
. Moving to the details, Central Asia
spend
Correct subject-verb agreement
spends
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their
water
for
Change preposition
on
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agriculture the most at 88%, and Africa is the second highest country which
waste
Change the verb form
wastes
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fluid for growing crops at over eighty
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
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.
In addition
,
water
usage for industries is the first position in North
America
and
Europe
, and the amount of
water
for factories in North
America
is more than in
Europe
because rates for industrial
use
in North
America
is just under half and
proportion
Correct article usage
the proportion
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in
Europe
is 32%. On the other
hands
Fix the agreement mistake
hand
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, every
areas
Change to a singular noun
area
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exploits
their
Correct pronoun usage
its
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water
for domestic
use
the least, and
percentage
Correct article usage
the percentage
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for domestic
use
in Central Asia and South East Asia
are
Change the verb form
is
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the
last
position at seven
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
.
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