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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
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 used in 3 different fields in 6 areas throughout the world. The data is measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is easily apparent that
water
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 is used the most in the Agricultural sector almost in all of the supplied charts. Getting back to details North America’s and Europe’s data seem relatively equal and they are outside of the trend mentioned below because in these two
areas
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 Industrial
usage
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 of
water
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 is the highest one and its accounts for 48% and 53% respectively. But even in these two areas
usage
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 of
water
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 is still more in agriculture rather than domestic use.
On the other hand
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 in South
America
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 only 10% of the
usage
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 of
water
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 goes into an industrial field at the expense of the agricultural sector which represents just above 70% of the total amount. In terms of Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia their charts
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 represent extremely similar data. The
usage
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 of
water
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 in agriculture average accounts for around 85%,
while
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 the other two sectors are below 20% of the total
usage
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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