The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the value of one country’s exports in many types between 2015 and 2016
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the table chart compares various Linking Words
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the proportion in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
In general, it can be clearly seen that petroleum and engineered products were the main export earnings for both in 2015 and 2016, and Change preposition
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amount
of export increased in 2016 except for gems and jewellery decrease.
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the amount
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and engineered products were the two most valuable in Correct article usage
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