One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

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Dear Mr.Derek, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I appreciate your efforts towards

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the summer camp. I heard from one of our colleagues, there is one job opening, a

sports

trainer is required for

this

season. I am writing

this

letter to recommend my friend for

this

position. Well, my friend John, is my childhood friend and we studied together from 5th class to 12th standard. John is postgraduate,

Firstly

, he has 4 years of experience in SSBN college as a

sports

trainer.

Secondly

, he was one of the club members of

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sports

club.

Finally

, he worked as a cricket coach at Little Flower College. Now, he wants to train younger students. I guess, based on his qualifications and prior experience, he will be suitable for

this

sports

trainer in our school. I would like to request you

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go through his CV once and attach it here. Please feel free to contact me if you require more details about him. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Naga

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diligence
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