The table data shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the United Kingdom in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the expense ratios of grown-up and younger English on four items proportionate to their earning in 2005.
Overall
, adult UK residents spent most percentages of their income
on food
and electronic devices while
children’s expenditure was mostly on music
and video
.
To illustrate, an average adult English spent over one-fourth of their income
on food
in 2005 while
15 per cent of the income
went on purchasing electronic devices. Their spending on music
and video
was quite low, only 4% and 2% respectively. Interestingly, men spent 21% of their earnings on electronic gadgets, which was exactly treble than that of women. However
, women spent more on food
and slightly higher on music
. But their expenditure on videos was almost ignorable proportionate to their income
.
Children, on the other hand
, spent only around one-tenth of their income
on food
while
a large ratio on music
and electronic tools, 41 and 35 per cent consecutively. Youngsters' expense proportion on video
was much higher than that of adults, more than 7 times to be more precise. Among those children, boys spent the most proportion of their income
on video
and electronics, 20 and 28 per cent sequentially, while
girls preferred more ratio on food
and music
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