The tables show(table a) the average of Urban zone traffic (in kilometres per hour or kph) in a number of countries over a fifty-year period, including a future estimate; and also (table b) the total number of Urban zones per country(in thousands)

Table (a) gives information about the average speed in conurbations traffic zones in
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variety of countries in the half period of a century and
also
table(b) illustrates data about the number of town distractions related to each territory.
Overall
, it can be seen that Canadian folks have driven faster than others and its rate is going to be high in the prediction period
while
Italian had the lowest amount in the first year
whereas
its rate is about to be the lowest again in 2020. As regards the second chart the USA will experience the enormous Urban sprawl in comparison with others. Looking at the details, communities
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all different races have become aware of safety and
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their speed
while
driving on average from seventy kph per hour to forty kph per hour and in the
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year it will be reached up to sixty kph. If we look at
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the second chart it is obvious that the USA will be the head country with 128.2 urban zones and Russia is the only country
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regions will be decreased.
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