The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on

different daily activities.
The supplied table illustrates the average amount of time that men and women spend on different activities during the day. From an
overall
perspective, it can be seen that males spend more time on leisure
while
sleeping is the most time-consuming for both sexes. Getting back to details, sleeping occupies more than 8
hours
of the day. For resting and personal care make and females allocate between 40 and 48 minutes
while
time spent eating is considerably more with approximately half an hour. In terms of leisure, watching TV it listening to the radio is the most preferred activity and people spend more than 2
hours
doing it. Females are more involved in social life in reading,
while
men are more active in sports and in their hobbies.
On the other hand
, men spend roughly 1 hour more in employment and study with 3
hours
and 45 minutes per day but women dedicate exactly 3
hours
to doing housework. Both of them spent an average of around 86 minutes travelling.
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