The bar chart illustrates the percentage of a car factory's total sale in four continents (Asia, Europe, South America and Asia) annually during the five-year period from 2006 to 2010.
The given chart highlights information about the
whole sale
of the percentage of Correct your spelling
wholesale
a
car industry yearly in four different continents, over a five-year period from 2006 to 2010.
Correct article usage
the
Overall
, it can be seen that there were upward trends in all mentioned continents over the period in question with the exception of South America at which point it experienced a downward Linking Words
trends
.
Looking at the details, the portion related to Asia started at 30% in 2006 and continued to Correct the article-noun agreement
trend
grew
Change the verb
grow
40
% in 2009 and Change preposition
at 40
finally
, it hit a peak at 50% in the Linking Words
last
year. Linking Words
Following
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this
, the percentage of Europe had almost alike ratio in the first and Linking Words
last
years but it increased Linking Words
over
40% in 2008. Change preposition
by over
Conversely
, the company lost its fame in South America year by year in 2007 and 2008. it means the ratios were over 20%but Linking Words
this
devastating condition continued until decreasing to 10% in 2010. Another striking point is that North America had the least eager nations and its proportion started at around 10% and fell to under one-tenth in the three following years and Linking Words
finally
remained Linking Words
in
30%.Change preposition
at
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