The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams give information on why people prefer to
work
from home
and the hours between men
and women
who worked at home
in the year 2019.
Overall
, it can seem that the diagram shows three reasons why many people chose to work
online from home
like saving money
, having more productivity and having easier childcare
. In addition
, saving money
was the highest. In contrast
, the lowest was easier childcare
.
Firstly
, men
preferred to work
online because they would save their money
by 45 per cent
.Followed by more productivity was 24 per cent
and easier childcare
was 4 per cent
respectively.
On the other hand
, women
enjoy working work
at home
because of saving money
by 42 per cent
.Followed by easier childcare
was 26 per cent
and more productivity was 11 per cent
respectively.
Moreover
, the diagram provides data on women
who preferred to have easier childcare
than men
. But, men
prefer to work
from home
because more productive than women
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