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A REPORT INDICATED THAT MANY CHILDREN BETWEEN 7 AND 11 SPEND TOO MUCH TIME WATCHING TELEVISION AND / OR PLAY VIDEO GAMES. HOW DOES THE PROBLEM AFFECT THE CHILDREN, THEIR FAMILIES AND SOCIETY? WHAT MEASURES CAN BE TAKEN TO CONTROL IT?

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Spending much
time
 in front of a
screen
 is a big issue at present days . A study reported that many
children
 , whose
age
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ages
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 is ranging from 7 to 11 years old , are used to consuming a lot of
time
 watching TV or playing video
games
 .
This
 behaviour affects their concentration ability and retard their relationship with their family and society .
Consequently
,
parents
 should develop their awareness about how to utilize their
time
 and put limits to control
screen
time
 for
children
 .
Firstly
 , when
children
 dedicate all their
time
 to staying in front of screens even watching TV or playing video
games
 , They decrease their ability to concentrate .
For example
 . Many studies are showed that there is a parallel correlation between ADHD ,a disease
makes
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children
 easily distracted and loss of focus , and the amount of
screen
time
 .
As a result
 , if
parents
 allow
children
 to spend much
time
 watching or playing
games
 ,
this
 affects them negatively.
Secondly
 ,
children
 should utilize much
time
 trying to develop their social skills by contacting their family and their friends.
this
 will widen their horizons and allow them to enjoy family
time
 . they should have the chance to learn how to build relationships.
Subsequently
 , if
children
 waste their
time
 playing
games
 and watching TV , they will lose their ability to communicate with others .
This
 will lead to a connected society .
Finally
 ,
parents
 should be aware of all these drawbacks and they should limit their
children
's
screen
time
 .
In addition
 ,
parents
 have to engage their
children
 in the daily life detail and enhance family visits .
Also
 , they should encourage
children
develop
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 friendships with neighbours and schoolmates .
Hence
 ,
children
 will use to utilise their
time
 in a good way. In conclusion , wasting
time
 on
children
 with screens is very harmful to their concentration and relations with family so it will lead to a disconnected society with fewer pioneers .
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