The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the process of making

cement

and how

cemente

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cement

is used to produce concrete which is used for construction purposes.

Cement

production

consist

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of 5 stages in total and the raw material used is limestone and clay.

Meanwhile

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concrete

production

require

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mixing

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the mixing

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of

cement

with water, sand and gravel. In the

production

of

cement

initially

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limestone and clay is passed through crusher and powdered.

Then

this

powder is passed through

mixer

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a mixer

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and mixed properly.

Subsequently

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the powder is passed through

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a roatating

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roatating

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rotating

heater, where heat is applied

on

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the materials passed through it. Later the powder substance is grinder well with the help of a grinder.

Finally

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the

cement

is produced and packed in bags for easy transportation and sale of product.

Whereas

, the

production

of concrete using

cement

is

compartively

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comparatively

an easier process. For

this

,

cement

(15%), water (10%), Sand (25%), and gravel (50%)

is

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combined together using huge

concreate

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concrete

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mixers which

roatates

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rotate

in speed. For quality concrete half of the mixture should consist of gravel, which are small stones with a ratio of quarter sand and

quater

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quarter

cement

with water.

Overall

, the

production

of

cement

is a long process,

whereas

concreate

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concrete

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production

is an easier method. Only a 15

perecentage

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percentage

of

this

cement

is used in the

production

of

concreate

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concrete

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.