The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flow chart illustrates the steps and tool
that is
employed to manufacture sand,and how concrete is made from adhesive . Linking Words
Overall
,the production of mud is seven stages with four pieces of equipment.The tools include a crusher,a blender, a rotating heater and a grinder, Linking Words
while
the production of concrete is two procedures with just one machine (concrete blender).
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The first step is
that the required quantity of limestone and clay is poured into a crusher,Linking Words
this
is to reduce the size of the materials into powder .Linking Words
The next step is
that the crushed limestones and clay are Linking Words
then
transferred into a machine called a mixer in other to mix the materials together.After the proper mixture has taken place,it Linking Words
thereafter
moved into a tool called a rotating heater where heat is introduced for the powder to become dry.Linking Words
Following
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this
,the dried mixture is transferred into a grinder to it a fine texture which is known as plaster.At the final stage,the product is packaged into a bag ready to be used for construction.
Moving to the manufacturing of concrete, Linking Words
firstly
,15% of sand and 10% of water is poured into a container known as a concrete food processor.Linking Words
Secondly
, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel(small stones) are Linking Words
also
added to the contents already in the blender.The mixture of these four materials results in concrete Linking Words
that is
used for building.Linking Words
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