You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. – I am on vacation • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.- investigate the case/send revised credit card statemen

Hello sir/mam, I am writing
this
letter to you regarding my recent credit card statement which has numerous transactions of big amounts in the
last
week. To introduce myself, I am Jasmeen Kaur, a member of your bank for the past 5 years. I am out of town for the
last
10 days, to be specific on a family vacation in Greece. There is no way that I have spent all
this
money mentioned in the statement. I have not even visited all these stores where all the costly shopping has taken place. The maximum expenditure shown on the list is for purchasing bitcoins and I am not into all
this
kind of stuff. You may well aware that the core purpose of a vacation is to be relaxed and get a break from the daily life issues for a
while
.
Instead
, I am being very stressed for the
last
2 days since I received these documents from the bank. Please investigate the root cause of the problem and kindly send me the edited version of the statement.
Also
, I would really appreciate it if you would be able to keep me posted that what were the reasons behind
this
. Yours sincerely, Jasmeen Kaur.
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