The pie charts compare the amount of online shopping sales for the retail sector in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Moreover, these sales are divided into four categories: travel, film/ music, book, and clothes.
The pie charts compare the number of online shopping
sales
for the retail sector in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Moreover
, these sales
are divided into four categories: travel
, film
/ music
, book, and clothes.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that although
the sale of travel
accounted for the largest proportion in 2003, 10 years later it was replaced by film
and music
sales
.
Starting with 2003, the sales
of the travel
sector accounted for the highest percentage, at 36%, followed by clothes at 24%, and film
/music
at 21%, respectively. In contrast
, books were the worst-selling category, seeing that they only made up 19% of all sales
.
In 2013, the sale of film
and music
experienced a considerable increase to 33%, replacing that of travel
, which slightly declined to 29% from 36%.
Finally
, it is interesting to note that although
books were the worst-selling category in 2003, there were replaced by clothing whose sales
dropped significantly from 24% and 16%, making it the category with the smallest sales
in 2013.Submitted by nuchnapa.anna on
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