The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph shows the phone calls by billions of

minuts

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minutes

mobiles in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002, separated by three calling categories: national and international, local and mobile. The main results

shows

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show

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exponencial

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exponential

increase

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in mobile calls, a linear

increase

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in national and international calls, and

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increase

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and

then

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decrease

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a decrease

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local calls. Local calls have the most call

minuts

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minutes

during the time,

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however

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,however

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the distance

with

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between

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national and phone calls has been

reducing

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reduced

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. Local calls were 72

billions

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billion

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minutes

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in 1995, reached the maximum in 1999 with 90

billion

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minutes

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and

then

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it was reduced to 72

billions

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billion

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again in 2002. Regarding national and international calls, it shows

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constant

increase

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, from 38

billion

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minutes

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in 1995 to 58

billion

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minutes

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in 2002.

Finally

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, mobiles call had the most important

increasing

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increase

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, starting from 3

billion

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minutes

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in 1995 to 45

billion

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calls in 2002

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words increase, minutes, billion with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

149 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

total number of minutes
telephone calls
categories
local – fixed line
national and international – fixed line
mobiles
general trend
yearly totals
significant changes
milestones
data
rise significantly
decline
steady increase
fluctuate
peak
exponential growth
over the period

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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Museum and Art Galleries should concentrate on work that show history and culture of their own country rather than work of the other part in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school. Why is this? What other skills do you think it is important to be taught in schools?

some people usually appreciate others according to social status or material possessions and they think ol-fashioned values include honor, kindness, trust are not important in the digital era.

Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.