The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
#first #percentages #women #men #country #kinds #home #tasks #pet #house #second #amount #time #gender #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The bar charts illustrated the proportion of both gender different household chores in a particular country. It
also
shows the spending time
of each gender on each work during the day. Overall
, it is clear that
the majority of men and women spend their time
cooking and spend most of their time
on the same task.
Looking at the information in more detail it is obvious that cooking and cleaning are the most famous housing tasks among men about 60-40 per cent respectively and also
most of their time
take the same duties. Pet cares and house repairs take approximately less than 20 per cent and men spent less than 20 min perSubmitted by humaynew on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
▼
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
▼