Your recently visited a store and didn't like the customer service there. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say -What was the issue there? -Why wasn't the staff helpful? -Suggest what can be done about it
Dear Sir,
I have recently visited your
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I am 5 years old customer I was puraches
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sales man not providing good services they are not taking with customers.
I was looking Sports car for my child but I can't
find that in the store. I was waiting for help but nobody can't
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I was talk with both sales man
or the girls Correct your spelling
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but they didn't
respond properly and it was a very bad thing happened
to me. I wanted to be noted my point as
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I will suggest please take feedback form with every customer that will help full for you
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with any customers. thank you so much for your valuable time to read my
letter I am accepting that letter will be helpful for you to improve your sales and relationship with the customer.
Regards,
Akanksha TiwariChange the verb form
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.