The charts below show the percentage of males and females who worked in three different sectors in two countries in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of males and females who worked in three different sectors in two countries  in 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided pie charts
gives
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information about the rate of male and female
worked
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working
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in three different sectors (
agriculture
,
industry
and
serviec
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services
service
) in two
unclearified
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unclarified
unclassified
countries in 2007. The units are measured in
percentageges
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percentages
.
Overall
, in both
countries
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the rate of
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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worked
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in the service sections took the predominant position. It is
also
clear that the
share
for an
industry
section
in
country
A was the least worked
section
while
the same
figure
for
agriculture
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the agriculture
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section
in the
country
was least considerable. 8%
aparted
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apart
the
share
of
male
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males
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working in
service
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the service
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section
in
country
A from the same
figure
for
females
in
country
A (49%) with the dominance of the former. The same index of male working in
agriculture
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the agriculture
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section
in
country
A (43%) was higher than the same
figure
in
country
A for
females
. The same
figure
for
males
working in
industry
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the industry
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section
in
country
A (15%). The same
share
for
females
in
country
A (8%) was the least
considerable
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in the group. 23 %
aparted
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apart
the
figure
of
females
in
service
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the service
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section
in
country
B
from the same
share
for
males
in
country
B
(65%) with the dominance of
former
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the former
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. The same index for
males
working in an
industry
section
(32%) was higher than the same
figure
for
females
in
country
B
(11%). The same
share
for
agriculture
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the agriculture
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section
for
males
was 3%
while
the same data for
females
in
country
B
was the least considerable (1%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words agriculture, industry, share, section, country, figure, females, males, b with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 3 times.
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