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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter •Tell them why you need to move the interview time •Ask to change the interview date •Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

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Dear Recruit Manager, I am writing to apologise for not being able to go to come to the
interview
 next week and ask for a new arrangement. Unexpectedly, my current manager is going to extend his business trip to Japan for 3 three weeks. Fortunately, we have a new and important partner who is going to sign a contract with us for a very good deal. The manager needs me to support him in
this
 decisive meeting;
therefore
, I have to stay in Japan on the day of the
interview
. I hope that you are willing to reschedule the
interview
. For your, information I’ll have three days off after my business trip. It’ll be from 5th – 8th August 2023. To be honest, I am really delighted to know that I have an opportunity to be in the
interview
 to share my experiences and skills because I’m interested in the position which is so good for my career path. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Once again, please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience it may cause. Yours faithfully, Le Hien
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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