The pie charts show the comparison of different kind of energy consumption of the UK in two years.

The pie charts show the comparison of different kind of energy consumption of the UK in two years.
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The given pie charts demonstrate the contrast of
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proportion
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the proportion
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of different
energy
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sources
of
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the UK between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, the
consumption
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of coal had the highest ratio for each year, and other unsignificant resources had the lowest
proportion
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than major fuels
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as coal, petrol, gas and nuclear power. In 1995, the UK's
energy
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sources of coal, gas and petrol had quite similar
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proportion
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which was approximately
one third
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of
consumption
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.
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, coal
consumption
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took the highest ratio which was 29.80%. Nuclear and other
energy
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methods,
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, had smaller ratios than the major fuels
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as 6.40% and 4.90% respectively. After the period of 10 years, coal and gas
consumption
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inclined relatively, but petrol
consumption
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declined by roughly 10 per cent.
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, coal
energy
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provided the highest
proportion
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with 30.93%. Nuclear power approximately increased by 4 per cent and reached
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10.10%. Undefined sources rather than the major
energy
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providers nearly doubled
its
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proportion
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and took 9.10% of
energy
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production of the UK in 2005.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, energy, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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