The table below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

The table below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.
The table chart compared the
hours
of males and females who participate in daily tasks in the UK. First of all, females spent more
hours
on sleeping activity around 8.18
hours
as compared to males, who spent only 8.04
hours
per day.
Moreover
, boys and girls utilised the same
hours
for personal care and rest.
However
, the
hours
of eating and drinking for men and women were at 1.25 and 1.19 respectively. The second highest time spent on all leisure activities was almost 5
hours
for both genders.
On the other hand
, the lowest minutes were spent on sports approximately 0.9 minutes by males and females.
Furthermore
, men utilised almost half of the time on childcare and housework compared to women,
whereas
both genders spent around the same time on travel, voluntary work and meetings.
Similarly
, the figure of men who do other activities has recorded an average of 12 minutes which was more than women.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the highest
hours
spent on sleeping.
However
, the lowest
hours
spent on sports.
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