The charts show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
The pie charts illustrate information about the percentage of students at one university in the UK who are bilingual or speak more than
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30% of the learner could speak Spanish and 20% of them were not able to speak any Linking Words
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