When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When deciding

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job

,

salary

is the first thing to consider. Personally, I agree with

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statement but in my

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other factors

such

as working environment and

job

satisfaction should be taken the same consideration as well

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when making a

job

desicions

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. On the one hand, there are various benefits why people consider

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the size of the

salary

offered.

Initially

, it is essential to keep up with basic expenses and lifestyle. And

also

helpful for unexpected cost as illness costs, hospital bills and so forth... Plus, it is better to establish good financial background.

Furthermore

, living keeps increasing year after year and it is leading

human

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to feel financial stress. Everything from education and healthcare to food and housing has become expensive. If people are paid well, they will feel that the company appreciates their contribution. Even a good

salary

raises a person's self and social image.

On the other hand

, I believe that other factors are among the most important features when choosing a career.

Firstly

, the working environment should be taken into account. A good working place may include entrainment objects, colleagues,

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. In that atmosphere,

employee

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employees

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could easily increase self-development and productivity by communicating with other workers.

Secondly

,

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job

satisfaction

another

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essential aspect

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be considered. When it comes to choosing a

job

, a person who wants to earn a big

salary

has to enjoy

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working in a company.

Therefore

, the work hours should be reasonable, the working station should pay well

also

. Employees are human beings like anyone else. In my perspective, a

job

that pays a bit less but offers satisfactory

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working conditions is a much better idea.

To sum up

,

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size of the

salary

plays a huge role when picking a

job

but other factors in combination have more vital benefits and have more significance than the money.