The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017. Summarise it.
This
chart depicts the mean value in daily expenditure by tourists to New Zealand, spanning two decades, from 1997 to 2017. The line graph is further
divided to show the different categories
of visitors, from those travelling for business
, for leisure or for visiting friends and relatives.
The trend is similar for all three categories
- there is a general increase seen initially
from 1997-2003, which then
drops and remains steady until 2017. There are, of course, fluctuations seen, but the general trend seems to plateau.
Between 1997 and 2003, there is a distinct difference between the groups with the most expense
carried out by those in New Zealand on business
, whilst the least is the group visiting family. After 2003, there is a sharp decrease in business
expense
until it stabilises with the group there on holiday. Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
However
, there is no overlap seen with the category visiting friends as that group is continuously spending less.
Those there on business
inititally
spend around $300 per Correct your spelling
initially
day
, but after 2003 this
dropped to around $200 per day
- a decrease of $100 per day
. Similarly
the expenditure of the other two Add a comma
,Similarly
categories
also
dropped, but not to the extent of the business
travellers. The tourists spent around $40 less per day
and those there visitng
family spent approximately $60 less per Correct your spelling
visiting
day
.
Interestingly, the only category to have dropped below the expense
recorded in 1997 is the people who travelled to New Zealand on business
- the other two groups remained consistent with their 1997 expense
.
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
Overall
there is a decrease in all three categories
after 2003, which may have been due to
less travelling which means less expense
; or maybe due to
an inflation in price from 1997 to 2003.Submitted by patelmeera on
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