The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.

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line graph illustrates the inhabitants of India and China between 2000 and today with

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for development till

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of 2050.

overall

, It is significant to note that the two. countries experienced a drastic increase,and

this

will continue in the future In India, the number of people

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as the

years

went and it is expected to reach almost 1,6 Billion by 2050.

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, in 2000 the figure was the lowest, five

years

later the numbers increased gradually to 1.1 billion in the population.

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a steady rise as the

years

went and they

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relatively uniform between 1.1 to 1.5 respectively. ‏An opposite pattern can be seen In

china

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China

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, in 2005 the population recorded at ‏1.3

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.

Furthermore

,The highest number will be

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in 2030 pushing the figure to the peak of under 1.5 people. ‏

However

, in 2030 both ‏countries

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‏to be identical . After ,that the population project going to ‏fall

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‏to reach only 1.4 Billion .