In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. It is more preferable in today's job market as without theoretical knowledge tasks cannot be performed in a job.

In today’s globalised
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some people consider that there is no need
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qualifications for
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job,
while
, others believe university graduation is important. In
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First,
big companies prefer more experienced employees rather than workers who have only diplomas.
This
is because, it will take time for firms to teach new colleagues.
For instance
, huge corporations
such
as Facebook,
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pick applicants for their IT skills not only for their graduation degree.
Moreover
, employees who have experience being more mobile and their problem
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abilities
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formalized. Turning to the other side of the argument, some jobs need theoretical knowledge.
For example
, doctors should learn human anatomy accurately at university. After
it
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they can use their skills at hospitals.
Furthermore
, scientists who investigate important knowledge about Earth and so on should learn their sphere
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lessons.
In addition
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opinion
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some professionals should learn their area
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classes and at the same time practise.
To sum
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all
above
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mentioned, nowadays some jobs do not need formal certificates. In these spheres job experience
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important rather than
diploma
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.
However
, some professions
such
as doctor should be deep knowledge. Personally, I think it depends
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job is it.
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