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The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the percentages of females and males who do housework
such
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 as cooking, cleaning, pet care, and house repairs,
as well as
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, the
time
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 spend to do those work. In general, the proportions of women cooking and cleaning are higher than men,
whereas
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, pet care and house repairs are more likely done by men.
Similarly
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, women spent more
time
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 cooking and cleaning than their counterparts. The percentages of cooking and cleaning that are done by females are both 20% higher than their counterparts.
Likewise
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, females spent about 85 and 78
minutes
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 on cooking and cleaning respectively which are longer
time
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 than the other gender. They only spent 60
minutes
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 cooking and 45
minutes
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 cleaning. In terms of house repairs, almost 20% is done by men, meanwhile, women only take nearly 10%. It takes 20
minutes
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 to be done by males. Both genders spend almost the same proportion and
time
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 when taking care of their pet.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, minutes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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