You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Write at least 150 words.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the two New Zealand
cities
’ median daily maximum temperatures generally follow a completely different pattern from
two
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the two
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United Kingdom
cities
. As can be seen, NZ
cities
has
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consistently higher
datas
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data
than UK
cities
throughout the year. In the beginning months of the year, Auckland and Christchurch are in higher
temperatures
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temperature
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trends, with the figures at approximately
24oC
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24
and
23oC
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23
respectively. The temperatures in both
cities
then
decline moderately, hitting a low of 15oC in Auckland and 11oC in Christchurch over 5 months later, before jumping up to around 20oC in December.
In contrast
, the
datas
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data
for London and Edinburgh show a temperature
just
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over 5oC during January. There is an upward tendency in London
as well as
Edinburgh, with the former rising to about 23oC and the latter leaping to barely
18oC
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18
. For the final month, the temperature for London
then
dips to approximately 7oC, followed by Edinburgh’s figure at above 6oC.
Last
but not least, it can be clearly seen that the two
cities
in NZ and
UK
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the UK
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both
experience
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experienced
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a rise and a decline during a 12-month period.
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