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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given pie chart depicts the amount of
water
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 used in six different areas in the world for three main purposes, namely agriculture, industrial and domestic uses. At a glance, it's obvious that agricultural use allocates the most amount of whole
water
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 consumption to itself in these four zones: Central
Asia
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, Africa, Southeast
Asia
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, and South
America
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, with percentages of 88, 84, 81, and 71, respectively.
On the other hand
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, in Europe and North
America
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, most figures belong to industrial use, which is about half of the whole uses. Meanwhile, it shows in central
Asia
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, Africa, and South
America
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, the least percentage of
water
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 is used in their industrial field, with these order numbers: 5%, 7%, and 10%. Domestic users have the least percentage of the total consumption of
water
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 in South East
Asia
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 at 7%, North
America
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 at 13%, and Europe at 15%, and it is equal between Southeast
Asia
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 and Central
Asia
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.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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