The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The images illustrate the amount of capital of five different product categories, when exported, bring to a country. There is a general trend with the export of Petroleum products and Engineered goods compared with the others. It
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compares its growth in percentages between 2015 and 2016 where we can observe a general increase in all the categories except gems and Jewellery. Generally, Petroleum and Engineered goods are the ones that bring reach over 55
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dollars a year and they both increase by 2016. Petroleum increased by 3% compared to 2015 and Engineered goods increases
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8.5% topping 61 lots in 2016. The next one is Gems and Jewellery that which can be seen a decrease between two years of 5.18% reaching 41
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dollars in 2016. The other two categories are Agricultural products with an export value of 30
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that remain the same over the years
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and Textiles which in 2015 was earning less than 26
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.It rapidly peak 31 billons in 2016 increasing more than 16% compared to
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year.
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