The line graph below shows the population size, birth and death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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This
image illustrates the number of people living in England and Wales and the birth
and death
rate per 1000 persons between 1700 and 2000. Overall
, the population
size increases over the years in the United Kingdom while
the birth
and death
rates
remain stable.
The main trend on the graph shows the population
growth in the UK of 50 million
between 1700 and 2000. However
, in 1750 there was an increase of 10 million
but dropped approximately to 5 million
. After
this
, the population
sharply increased peaking at 50 million
in the year 2000.
On the other hand
, birth
and death
rates
fluctuate between 20/1000 and 40/1000 individuals. Both rates
increased from 1700 to 1750 remaining stable until 1800 staying around 38-39 per 1000. From that point, both rates
gradually decreased approximating 20/1000, however
, the birth
rate increased in 2000 while
the death
rate remained stable. In general, those two rates
haven't changed dramatically compared to the population
size.Submitted by celinedoultremontt on
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