You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email • give details of the purchase • describe the problem • explain why you need a replacement urgently You do NOT need to write any addresses.Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to bring your attention to a concerning issue regarding the

shirt

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that I purchased recently from your online

shop

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"Mama Clothes".

Last

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week, I was attracted by your

shop

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's interesting online advertisement. You promoted yourself as "the best

shop

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ever". So I bought a white

shirt

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from your

shop

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and really expected to wear the

shirt

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to my friend's birthday party. Unfortunately, when I received the

shirt

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, I was extremely disappointed with that. I observed the

shirt

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was rough and dirty. Regardless of that, there was even an unexpected dye dotting on the bottom of the

shirt

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which made the whole

shirt

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look like a dirty flag. In light of the aforementioned issue, I would like to request a replacement as soon as possible.

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is because, I

had

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took lots of time to select the appropriate design style for the

shirt

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in your

shop

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, and I need to wear

the

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brand new

shirt

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to attend my friend's birthday party soon. I request a timely response to

this

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letter addressing the concerns raised. I look

forwardto

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forward to

a satisfactory resolution and resorting my faith in your company.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

191 words

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