You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email • give details of the purchase • describe the problem • explain why you need a replacement urgently You do NOT need to write any addresses.Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#purchase #company #email #replacement #addresses #sir #madam

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to bring your attention to a concerning issue regarding the

shirt

that I purchased recently from your online

shop

"Mama Clothes".

Last

week, I was attracted by your

shop

's interesting online advertisement. You promoted yourself as "the best

shop

ever". So I bought a white

shirt

from your

shop

and really expected to wear the

shirt

to my friend's birthday party. Unfortunately, when I received the

shirt

, I was extremely disappointed with that. I observed the

shirt

was rough and dirty. Regardless of that, there was even an unexpected dye dotting on the bottom of the

shirt

which made the whole

shirt

look like a dirty flag. In light of the aforementioned issue, I would like to request a replacement as soon as possible.

This

is because, I

had

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apply

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took lots of time to select the appropriate design style for the

shirt

in your

shop

, and I need to wear

the

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brand new

shirt

to attend my friend's birthday party soon. I request a timely response to

this

letter addressing the concerns raised. I look

forwardto

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forward to

a satisfactory resolution and resorting my faith in your company.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

191 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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