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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The image illustrates data about potato consumption and production in 2006 from 5 different countries.
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, Europe was the
seocond
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second
 larger producer and the second country on the chart that consumed more kilograms of
potatoes
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 per
person
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 in a
year
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. It can be seen that Europeans in 2006 consumed 96.1 kilograms of
potatoes
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 per
person
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,
while
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 North America only reached 57.9kg/ per
person
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beeing
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being
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second on the list. The countries like Asia, South and Central America and Africa are at the bottom of the
conspumption
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consumption
 table with an average of 20kg/
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potato
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potatoes
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 a
year
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. The Asians, who used to consume 25.8 kilograms per
person
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 that
year
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, were the largest producers, growing a total amount of 131.2 million tonnes of
potatoes
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 in 2006. The second bigger producer was Europe reaching 126.3 million tonnes a
year
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.
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, the rest of the countries remained low with an average of 20 million tonnes that same
year
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.

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