You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear Sir, I am a member of an organisation which meets regularly at your

restaurant

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. Yesterday I had dinner with my family for the anniversary of 2

years

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wedding at your

restaurant

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so I am writing

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letter to send you something that makes me uncomfortable at

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time. I really love your

restaurant

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as the food here is very delicious and all staff always take care of the customer. But yesterday

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we had a meal, your staff turned on the music very loud, so noisy, we could not talk together,

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I had not a nice meal. After dinner, I told your staff, who was turned on music about the problem but he does not care about it, he just smile and left. When I send

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trouble, I hope your

restaurant

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will change the time for turn on music or lower volume min, please. On Saturday next week, my class will have a meeting at your

restaurant

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for lunch, so I hope everything will be better than

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time. Thank and I look forward to your response. Faithfully. Cindy.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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