The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line chart illustrates the growth of British children between the
years
1990 and 2001 separated by 4 different age ranges. Overall
, the kids aged between 10-14 are the only percentage increasing while
the others decreased or remained similar over the years
.
The main trend is that British teenagers aged 10-14 years
old increased by around 3% between those 12 years
, peaking at 26% of the children population in 2001. It can be seen that kids between 5 to 9 remained similar with a total increase of 0.5%, waving a 1% over the years
.
On the other hand
, the younger British citizens with the 0-4 age range decreased by around 3% between 1990 and 2001. They were almost the majority reaching 26% of minors during the first 3 years
and dropped in 1992 until the last
year. The last
group aged between 15-19 years
old were the majority of the kid population overreaching 26%, however
, there was a fall of 3% during the first 4 years
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