The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line chart illustrates the growth of British children between the
years
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1990 and 2001 separated by 4 different age ranges.
Overall
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, the kids aged between 10-14 are the only percentage increasing
while
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the others decreased or remained similar over the
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. The main trend is that British teenagers aged 10-14
years
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old increased by around 3% between those 12
years
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, peaking at 26% of the children population in 2001. It can be seen that kids between 5 to 9 remained similar with a total increase of 0.5%, waving a 1% over the
years
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.
On the other hand
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, the younger British citizens with the 0-4 age range decreased by around 3% between 1990 and 2001. They were almost the majority reaching 26% of minors during the first 3
years
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and dropped in 1992 until the
last
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year. The
last
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group aged between 15-19
years
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old were the majority of the kid population overreaching 26%,
however
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, there was a fall of 3% during the first 4
years
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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