The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
Introduction
The two pie charts compare 5 categories of France's comparison of energy production (gas, petrol, nuclear,coal and others) between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
It is the noticeable proportion of petrol experienced a considerable fall from 1995 to 2005 while
this
figure for rest the power saw a rise.
Body 1
In 1995, 29.27% of average France's assimilation of energy production belonged to petrol which has one of the largest pie charts. In contrast
, by 2005, this
figure had fallen by a decade per cent.
Body 2
By contrast
, in terms of coal, the proportion of comparing this
category made up 29.80% in 1995, after decade this
figure saw an increase in per cent retail sector of all.
In France, the smallest production of energy belonged to others in the first year, however
, in 2005, there was one on twenty per cent rise from 4.90% to 9.10 %Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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