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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

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No one would deny that certain workers
such
 as nurses,doctors and teachers are being underpaid and some
people
 believe that they should be paid more
while
 other
people
 like film actors or company bosses
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 paid
insanly
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insanely
 high for the work that they do.I partially agree with
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 notion.
this
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Apperantly
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Apparently
,various factors influence a section of
people
 to advocate that the health care workers and teachers deserve a pay rise.
to begin
 with,medical staff are always short-staffed.
as
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 a result one person does
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work that should have been done by 4
people
.
secondly
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 teachers are often a source of inspiration and motivation,pushing students to do their best even though their students might not believe in themselves.they are able to help shape academic goals.
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are deserve to be paid fairly.
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medical
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 is a difficult field that requires commitment,dedication,
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hard work
,
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 to multitask,intelligence,spontaneous
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 skills and most importantly patience and resilience.
as
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 a result,it deserves to be
compansated
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compensated
 adequately.
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Even though
,
people
 working in the fields of acting and business
also
 contribute to
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 by inspiring
people
 in various aspects.
in particular
businessman
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businessmen
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 and
artist
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artists
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 can bring
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 and name
for
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 the countries.through their actions and achievements.
to
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 illustrate
together with
 the rise of
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 in the 1950s,
argentina
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Argentina
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 saw a massive increase in its popularity,
makind
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making
 it a well-known tourist destination by 1960. In conclusion,remuneration is a key consideration of
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profession
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professionals
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 and all of them are struggling to earn a living,
hence
 the government is to consider the sector which
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 attention and focus funds in the right direction.
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