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You recently went to a restaurant and were very disappointed in the level of customer service. Write an email to a restaurant owner in about 150-200 words. Your email should include the following things: • Describe your situation • Complain about the service • Suggest solutions to improve

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Dear Sir, I trust
this
 message finds you in the best spirits! I am writing
this
 email to voice a concern regarding the unsatisfactory service of your restaurant in expectation of rectifying the same. Having been a longstanding patron of your exceptional restaurant, I went to dine in to celebrate my birthday party with my friends. Since the table for six was prebooked, we all went inside without asking
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front desk person.
However
, we were asked rudely to wait outside as tables were overbooked. Despite waiting for so long, not only we got dirty tables but
also
 a table of five
instead
 of six. Even after asking thrice for another chair, it seemed that request had fallen on deaf ears. Given the restaurant serves the best pizza
overall
, we ordered mushroom-free pizzas. To my dismay, overcooked and cold pizzas were served too with mushrooms.
Such
 a dreadful experience on my birthday was uncalled
.
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 Considering the aforementioned scenario, well-trained staff
along with
 an improvement in hygiene standards should be in command to avoid
such
 a situation in future.
Additionally
, it would be appreciable if you can reimburse the full amount in exchange for the inconvenience I handled. I have attached the invoice
along with
 an account detail. Looking forward to hearing from you Regards, Nk
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