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Write an email to the restaurant's manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

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Respected manager, Being a consistent customer of your well-known
restaurant
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, I would like to bring to light a concern regarding your
restaurant
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's disappointing food quality and service which needed to be rectified. Yesterday,
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 dining at your
restaurant
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 with my family, I ordered your famous Papaya chat without peanuts since I am allergic to it.
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,to my shock, the dish was served with peanuts; Even after asking for
replacement
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, it seemed like the request had fallen on deaf ears since no action was taken. Not only was food served with peanuts but
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 overcooked and dry. Adding fuel to the fire, the wine glass has a stain of lipstick on its rim.
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 keeping calm during
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 a horrific series of events, I even had to ask a designated waiter to replace those.
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, none of us ever had
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 a shambolic experience at any
restaurant
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. Considering the aforementioned scenario, I believe to mitigate
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 occurrences in future, well-trained staff and good hygiene
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 a necessity.
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, full reimbursement as a token of apology will be palpable from your end. I have attached the invoice and account details for the refund. If you need any other information, please feel free to contact
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 +91 9920613820 Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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 sincerely, Nikita
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