The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In
this
graph it has the data of all the quantities of the shipment in the UK. The between dates are 1972 to 2002 by 4 diferent types of transport.
The most popular transportation is by road
, in 1974 just the 65 points
of the people use it, but know in 2002 it has the place of 95 points
. In comparation of water transportation. Is more popular for almost 30 points
these days. We can see on the graphic that the water transportatien never was better than the road
.
Talking about the rail: it seems that remains almost the same, it went down on 1986 and 1998 but it stay like the beginning. In the other hand, the pipheline incrested almost 20 points
in 1982. In comparation with these two roads of transportation: The rail always won but the pipheline always fight for the 3rd place.
Seeing all the graph, We can resume that the road
is the best way of transit all over these years. From 1974 to 2002 the road
never went down in second place. And in the past 8 years have a very good climed of almost 15 points
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