The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK 

between 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In
this
graph it has the data of all the quantities of the shipment in the UK. The between dates are 1972 to 2002 by 4 diferent types of transport. The most popular transportation is by
road
, in 1974 just the 65
points
of the people use it, but know in 2002 it has the place of 95
points
. In comparation of water transportation. Is more popular for almost 30
points
these days. We can see on the graphic that the water transportatien never was better than the
road
. Talking about the rail: it seems that remains almost the same, it went down on 1986 and 1998 but it stay like the beginning. In the other hand, the pipheline incrested almost 20
points
in 1982. In comparation with these two roads of transportation: The rail always won but the pipheline always fight for the 3rd place. Seeing all the graph, We can resume that the
road
is the best way of transit all over these years. From 1974 to 2002 the
road
never went down in second place. And in the past 8 years have a very good climed of almost 15
points
.
Submitted by patriciareyesfiguero on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Add some linking words.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, points with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: