The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future
The chart provides information regarding the number of employees, split by three different industries (Manufacturing, Services, Agriculture), in the USA over a fifty-year
period
, from 1975 to 2025. Units are measured in millions of people.
Overall
, each industry has a different trend over the
period
given, which mentioned industries are predicted to stand at a low number in 2025, except Services. To start with, Agriculture stood at exactly 80
million
individuals in the first
period
, which remained stable for the next 2 years, before decreasing dramatically and
projected
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to get the lowest point at only 10
million
in the
last
year. Regarding the Manufacturing industry, it started with just around 10
million
, which
then
went up gradually and reached its peak at 40
million
in 1980, after which it
expected
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to slip back to its original level
at
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of
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10
million
at the end
of the
period
. Turning to or In comparison, the Services industry,
it
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began with just 10
million
employees in the first
period
, which
then
slightly increased to around 15
million
in the next four years, before forecasted to have a significant rise and achieve the apex, at 90
millions
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in the
last
year.
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