The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future
The chart provides information regarding the number of employees, split by three different industries (Manufacturing, Services, Agriculture), in the USA over a fifty-year
period
, from 1975 to 2025. Units are measured in millions of people. Overall
, each industry has a different trend over the period
given, which mentioned industries are predicted to stand at a low number in 2025, except Services.
To start with, Agriculture stood at exactly 80 million
individuals in the first period
, which remained stable for the next 2 years, before decreasing dramatically and projected
to get the lowest point at only 10 Add a missing verb
is projected
million
in the last
year. Regarding the Manufacturing industry, it started with just around 10 million
, which then
went up gradually and reached its peak at 40 million
in 1980, after which it expected
to slip back to its original level Add a missing verb
is expected
at
10 Change preposition
of
million
at the end
of the period
.
Turning to or In comparison, the Services industry, it
began with just 10 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
employees in the first period
, which then
slightly increased to around 15 million
in the next four years, before forecasted to have a significant rise and achieve the apex, at 90 millions
in the Change to singular
million
last
year.Submitted by nadiasyifaa on
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